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Post 11: Using Bernoff's blog post and Lynch's essay advice in writing

In reading Josh Bernoff's post the following quote really stuck out to me "If you’re writing something that has to fit in a box, forget the box. Think about the reader. What does she want to know? What would thrill her and get her thinking? What research would it take to convince her? Concentrate on that. If you’ve got something interesting to say, you can probably figure out a way to fit it in the box. But you won’t write something brilliant if you worry about the box, rather than the goodies inside." This really is some good advice that I could have used when writing my Doc 2 and any of my writing for that matter. When assigned a writing assignment and you get that standardized format you must adhere to, I tend to focus on making sure I have that as I go along. If I focused more on gathering useful information and using the outline method, I could help my writing process with valuable researched information. In Lynch's essay it is said "Third of all—damn . . . I still cannot get out of the habit of offering three reasons—the good old five paragrapher does feature the basics. Academic writing should make an argument; arguments should have reasons; reasons should be based on evidence. But as you can see, the form tends to straitjacket writing: it fits everyone, but once you’re in it, you can’t really move." This is referring to that standardized form again. The "5 paragraphs" form is the introduction, three supporting details paragraphs, and the conclusion. Which typically could make the writing to one seem dull and boring. But if we use the advice, we learn of from Bernoff and Lynch we can see how we can make the writing our own and it be an interesting read while still following the format requested. We can see the ways to accomplish both! 



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  1. The supporting paragraphs are the most interesting (typically!) to the reader as well, which definitely encourages me to try to focus more on them and not on just churning out 3 for my 5 paragraph plan. Plus, research can be fun once you get into it! You find out more information on your topic than you expect sometimes.

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